We've all heard it and cringed...

"...book made me so mad I threw it against the wall"

Don't Be THAT Writer....

There are a reported two million horsemen in the US alone. Wouldn't it be great to be able to write as if you've spent a few years in the barn?

Some misconceptions regarding horses are so deeply entrenched in literature that writers take them as fact without researching and it drives horsemen nuts.

Don't Alienate those Two Million Readers...

The 33 Worst Mistakes Writers Make About Horses by Sue L. Huffman covers many mistakes that even experienced writers tend to make about horses, including details that are so often glaring in their absence.

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So your hero jumps on his horse and---what?

When was the last time you galloped through the woods? ...charged the enemy, sword raised? ...got bucked off, stomped on or had a peevish mare tell you where to stuff it?

- For me, it was probably last week.

I've spent my professional life helping new riders work through mistakes and old riders avoid mistakes in new sports. And I've made my share of screw-ups. I know where things are likely to go wrong.

I understand the common misconceptions inside and out. I've seen them a thousand times in the arena, on the trail---and in far too many books. Don't write so horsemen snort and snicker or groan when they read your horses.

If you want to keep those horsemen reading, 33 Worst Mistakes Writers Make About Horses can be your best friend.

"Show don't tell." How often have we all heard that?

What if you could include a scene where readers understand your horse is a stallion without you having to mention his equipment? Wouldn't you love to be able to define your horses through simple characterization instead of tired, old labels?

Imagine being able to write riding as if you'd been doing it all your life. It's possible to give that illusion by knowing a few simple details to slip in, replacing the old clichés.

• Know when your hero needs to rest or feed his horse.
• Give your horse gender-specific characterization.
• Know the difference between proper terms and colloquial lingo.
• ...and thirty more simple yet important points.

Regardless if you are writing contemporary, western, historical or fantasy, this book covers the most important things you need to know about horses.

Let me help you avoid common mistakes from inside my world.

Use my experiences in your writing so when a reader who's a rider settles back with one of your books, they'll smile, nod and keep reading.

About the Author

Sue L's first pony came along early in her childhood and by her late teens she was teaching and training professionally. Since discovering AERC endurance riding in the late 80s, running wild through the woods has remained her true love while she's flirted with everything from 4-H, dressage and barrel racing to more esoteric sports such as jousting, mounted archery and Cowboy Mounted Shooting---all on horses she's bred and raised. Sue L. has a unique perspective into the relationship with a horse, not just from the many horses she's handled over the years, but from the untold hours of riding cross-country, day and night, in varied terrain and under all kinds of conditions.